
i trampled forth in tears n smile
it seems i lost a crew of rejoice,
it seems i lost a crew of rejoice,
or may be i gained a barrel of voice
the day i looked into his eyes,
i knew that larcenous would grab my skies
bog off...i m not a shnook,
i m bound to be a gaily brook
bog off...i m not a shnook,
i m bound to be a gaily brook
u may b dandy..spiffy..jaunty or may b Heron,
still my heart desires to dwell alone
my psyche cognizes your every step nigher,
and then i can't help my core to surge higher
the outset of the spring..when you whistled to greet me,
raging across the pike..banging through airs to heat me
praising vociferously the weather n charm,
that was the best spring which came widout any alarm
sky flushed with rosy splendour..sparkled with mizzle to mount,
well...i was truely lost in him...u know i had no1 else to count
he stopped n turned around said 'i'll jus cum' and vanished in sound,
i waited n waited and waited..lyk a nightingale on mound
freaky noises...dirty dipper...deadly sky..'when will u cum',
i lost my nerve when i heard a shreak..ran towards d dark in grief
somone hit him..he laid there...soaked in red,
twinkling eyes gazing at me just next to an orchid bed
that was the first time he grabed my palm..eyes swelled with tears i waited for his sign,
pressed his fingers n uttered in rhyme
"i won't confess that i love you because that will make you weep...just remember sweetheart keep a place for me in your heart deep"
then he lost into deadly silence...
dumping me yet again in world of ignorance
it seems i lost a crew of rejoice,
or may be i gained a barrel of voice...
to live alone with heart of stone...
in depth of which lives my love who's gone
yet when i gaze down the aisle,
i trampled forth in tears and smile...
mast h laki hats off..really awsum :) agar tune khud likha h to.. waise teri vocab itni dhaakad h ya dictionary/thesauras use karti h mjhe to spelling b nahi aati :P
ReplyDeleteladki*....
ReplyDeletethnx hny
ReplyDeleteoffcrse thesaurus use krti hu..bt nt 4 evry line ;)
just gone thru it agian....
ReplyDeletepr koi fayada nhi h.....i know i can't get d meaning of each n every word...
bt yah!!!....probably i'm getting the whole meaning vry rightly....
it's simply attractive...the flow of saga is vry smooth n calm.....it's wht i like d most
n
yah....surely i wld like to know the source....ur inspiration source
'inspiration source'..is my lyf as whole...;)
ReplyDeletemaybe i shudnt give in suggestions bout vocab or the use of words
ReplyDeletebut i personally feel
overdoing this might make the piece look dramatic and not genuinely yours.
Every new word you add it influences your thoughts for the rest of poem..!
i'll keep dat in mind buddy...;)
ReplyDeletethnx..i m alwez open 4 suggestions..;)